poem short film w/ panasonic g7+metabones ultra speedbooster+sigma 18-35 1.8

[Tarik Dobbs]

I would like some feedback/thoughts on this film I shot this past summer. I used Cine-like D and graded with FilmConvert. Shot on the Panasonic G7 with the Metabones Speed Booster Ultra and Sigma 18-35 1.8 lens.

[PannySVHS]

Hey Tarik, middle part with outdoor shots looking good with good framing and image choices, fitting rhythm as well. Parts before and after don´t have that. Maybe let somebody else edit with a fresh look on the footage and without too much adimiration for the material but a good hand to pick the right parts, in the best order with the most fitting length. Also the yellow of the girls face is just yellow without a motivated reason to be so, neither does it have a look adding to the depth or appeal or intensity or general quality of the image. Other than that, good effort. Keep it up!

 

Oh, and maybe you wanna check out Andy Lee´s posts on the Panasonic G7 for knowledge about the best profile and settings: