Please view my latest entry into the "Bike Shorts" competition in Virginia, USA. Here's a link: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=qkuqGKNKBvo&index=14&list=PL4m8lQGvjPNxO75BvCzKOb8xhgNCYo53R It won the "audience choice" award in this small film festival--only 13 entries. However, it recently was rejected in two other film competitions. My question is: how do you shorten a film like this but still get the idea of the film across to the viewer. P.S. Please view the entire film. There is a scene after the credits. (Would you have put the final scene BEFORE the credits.) Thanks in advance for your constructive criticism.